Storia Ancestale french & English translations (WIP)

[CFou!]

Originally Posted by demoniac

I'm about 50% done with Chapter 1 UK. There are some weird translations that I'm re-translating.

here quick translation of chapter2,3& 4 in English to help you

[CFou!]

Now all english googled translation done (to correct)

[demoniac]

I updated the intro to the proper English series title and some minor rephrasing. I found some of the original English text from the magazine series. I am not going to replace the translation with the original text now, but it might be best going forward.

Chapter 1 English is about 70% done. I stopped at _TXT2_205. The translation for _TXT2_119 and _TXT2_119 are awkward. They both have the same Italian sentence, "Fatti i fatti tuoi ciccione!" but online translations aren't making any sense. Might need to actual play the game to get more context.

http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA-src_BNK...r123_edited.7z

[CFou!]

Originally Posted by demoniac

I updated the intro to the proper English series title and some minor rephrasing. I found some of the original English text from the magazine series. I am not going to replace the translation with the original text now, but it might be best going forward.

Chapter 1 English is about 70% done. I stopped at _TXT2_205. The translation for _TXT2_119 and _TXT2_119 are awkward. They both have the same Italian sentence, "Fatti i fatti tuoi ciccione!" but online translations aren't making any sense. Might need to actual play the game to get more context.

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about _TXT_119.

I think that his interlocutor is a big monster.
When the monster asks to Richard if he is the chosen one, he answers:
- of course

either he makes fun of him:
- you better eat your own fat
or
- you better eat yourself.
or
- mind your own business
or
- fuck you

it's difficult to translate into french too

The dialogs are upside down so to understand them you have to start at the end in this case:
from 131 to 134
from 127 to 130
from 123 to 129
from 120 to 122
from 117 to 119
from 113 to 116

[CFou!]

Originally Posted by demoniac

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http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA-src_BNK...r123_edited.7z

attached compiled BNK of you las twork

[CFou!]

I have verify again and correct french translation on Chapter 1
last version of all src here (installed version not updated):
https://eab.abime.net/attachment.php...6&d=1586526545

[demoniac]

Originally Posted by CFOU!

about _TXT_119.
The dialogs are upside down so to understand them you have to start at the end in this case:

Thanks! That helped. The online translators were missing up due to the lack of a comma before "ciccione".

I have updated all the English dialog text and object names with the original publication's, which I think clarifies things quite a bit (e.g., "gems" are now "pods"). I have left some of the background passages as-is.

Intro and Chapter 1 are finished:
http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_SRC_Beta8-a_edited.7z


In case you are curious about some of the original text, the intro and Chapter 1 are located at:
http://www.immediatemovies.co.uk/at/opening.pdf

http://www.immediatemovies.co.uk/at/bookone.pdf

I have not found the text for the later chapters.

[CFou!]

Originally Posted by demoniac

Thanks! That helped. The online translators were missing up due to the lack of a comma before "ciccione".

I have updated all the English dialog text and object names with the original publication's, which I think clarifies things quite a bit (e.g., "gems" are now "pods"). I have left some of the background passages as-is.

Intro and Chapter 1 are finished:
http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_SRC_Beta8-a_edited.7z



http://www.immediatemovies.co.uk/at/bookone.pdf

I have not found the text for the later chapters.

Thanks here fixed UK Chaper 1 translation:
- some quotes and 0 were missing
- 3 sentences were too long (newline/CR has been moved)
- the game engines has been adapted to correctly display some options (continue & yes)
- English Chapter 1 tested (i finished chapter 1 with fixed version beta 9)

https://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src_beta9.lha

here installed version beta9:
https://eab.abime.net/zone/Sa-WHD-beta9.lha

[demoniac]

Originally Posted by CFOU!

Thanks here fixed UK Chaper 1 translation:
- some quotes and 0 were missing

I must've sent you the wrong files as I thought I had fixed them. Anyway, I noticed that Intro was missing a closing quote character.

I also changed the description of the potion in Chapter 1, so both entries match.

https://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src_beta9_edited.7z


I'll slowly go through Chapter 2. It might take me a few days.

[CFou!]

Fix redone....

- some quotes and 0 were missing
- 3 sentences were too long (newline/CR has been moved)
last src and compiled file attached

[demoniac]

I'm probably 50% done with Chapter 2. Will upload when I finish it.

[CFou!]

thnks for info

[demoniac]

Your Chapter 1 changes looked fine. I have replaced the potion descriptions as I think they make more sense now.

Chapter 2 took a lot longer to finish than expected. I need to take care of other matters this week. Will resume with Chapter 3.

http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_SRC_beta9a_edited.7z

[CFou!]

Hi Demoniac

You can found your last src fixed & compiled here (Beta9b):
https://eab.abime.net/showpost.php?p...85&postcount=1

i fixed ENglish charter 2:
- " ",0 instead of "",0 (first text not displayed)
- add a ',0' missing
- fix two sentences too longer

I play and finished english without display problem

For information Chap3 is more short and Chap 4 very short to transmate.

Thanks again for your work.

Best regards,

[demoniac]

I took a quick look at your Chapter 2 changes and added back in the two dashes. Basically, I'm using it for em dash and Chapter 1 already uses one.

http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-beta9b_edited.7z


Still busy with other things, but will resume when I can after this week.

[CFou!]

hi,
have you some progress with anothers chapters?

[demoniac]

I'm about 45% done with Chapter 3.

Is the Flask (Chapter 3 _TXT2_014), the same thing as the Potion in Chapter 2 (_TXT2_008)?

I'll wait until I'm done before I make more comments.

[CFou!]

Originally Posted by demoniac

I'm about 45% done with Chapter 3.

Is the Flask (Chapter 3 _TXT2_014), the same thing as the Potion in Chapter 2 (_TXT2_008)?

I'll wait until I'm done before I make more comments.

in my memory is not the same thing

in chapter 3 is poison mixed by Zard to kill Dracona

[demoniac]

Thanks for the info.

For Chapter 3 _TXT2_064, is that referring to death of Zibella?

I'm about 55% done.

[CFou!]

Originally Posted by demoniac

Thanks for the info.

For Chapter 3 _TXT2_064, is that referring to death of Zibella?

I'm about 55% done.

yes