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Old 05 April 2020, 07:28   #21
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@demoniac: Would be better if you put your edits in bold to make it easier to see what you've changed. I'm trying to stick as close to the layout of the original as possible, so where a

sentence starts/ends, so does the translation! The bit that says: "the boy had never cared -- until now!" could be written: "the boy had never cared... until now!".
There are diff tools for this (as bold is not going to work for deletions, but I'll paste my latest changes below with the Beta90c code.

Code:
 db "foot stuck in a hole. He started squirming, trying to free himself, but",0
Code:
 db "sucked down into the dark. It was like a nightmare he couldn't awaken",0
Code:
 db "when he opened his eyes, he found himself in a forest and saw an old man,",0
 db "staring at him silently...",0
Code:
 db "to help me. The Demon who is destroying my world right now is winning",0
^ The word "and" deleted.

Code:
 db 'but I am very weak," said Golan, showing him a small purple gem.',0
Code:
 db '"The gray eye sees the dark side of life, the green side sees kindness.',0
 db 'Only you can restore balance," said Golan.',0
^ Second double quote in first line removed.

Code:
 db "Everyone had always laughed at Richard for the different colours of his",0
 db 'eyes, but the boy had never cared... until now! "Look, I just want to',0
Code:
 db "After these words, Golan disappeared...",0

Source file:
https://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_INTRO_...ta90c_edited.s
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thanks

i will compile it and send new bank with WIN outro text X 4 to correction too this afternoon
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Old 05 April 2020, 15:35   #23
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attached:
- last UK intro text BNK compiled
- Win text BNK src (all chapters) to read and fix by english guys
- Chapter 1 text BNK src to read and fix by english guys too

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Old 05 April 2020, 20:59   #24
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last source now all translated file in folder 'lang' instead of "FR", "UK" and "IT"

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Old 07 April 2020, 01:26   #25
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Hi

Chapter 1 txt bank:
- FR verifyed
- UK to correct by english people

Chapter 2 txt bank
- FR done to verify
- UK to translate (bank done)

intro sequence
- FR verifyed
- UK to correct by english people

Win sequence
- FR verifyed
- UK to correct by english people

attached working version attached (beta4)

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I edited some periods that were out of place. I assumed the _TXT2_02 extra period is due to the double quote in the beginning of line 119, which I replaced with a single quote. Note: I didn't run the slave, I just looked at the hex value of IntroUK.BNK.

http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_INTRO_U...beta4_edited.s

I'll look at Chapter 1 next. Also noticed the English manual, does that need to be proofread?

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SA_GAMEC1_UK_txt.s is missing from the last archive. Note sure if there has been any updates since 09d, so I'll wait for a response before looking further.
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SA_GAMEC1_UK_txt.s is missing from the last archive. Note sure if there has been any updates since 09d, so I'll wait for a response before looking further.
attached missing file

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I edited some periods that were out of place. I assumed the _TXT2_02 extra period is due to the double quote in the beginning of line 119, which I replaced with a single quote. Note: I didn't run the slave, I just looked at the hex value of IntroUK.BNK.

http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_INTRO_U...beta4_edited.s

I'll look at Chapter 1 next. Also noticed the English manual, does that need to be proofread?
thanks i will use it for beta 5 (it seems correct after compilation)

today i verify french translation of chapter 2 and will start texts extraction for chapter 3
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for information with next beta 5
all crashes after loading of a save game and when an room message are displayed are fixed.
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Hi,

Last full version and source code for beta 5 on the first post of the thread here:
https://eab.abime.net/showthread.php?t=101530



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CHapter 3 : Italian BNK created to translate in french tomorrow

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SA_GAMEC1_UK_txt.s is missing from the last archive. Note sure if there has been any updates since 09d, so I'll wait for a response before looking further.
last version attached

-Win sequences & Chapter 1 in googled English
- Chapter 2,3 UK src with italian extacted texts to translate

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I finish Chapter 1&2 in french without apparent problem.
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I'm in the process of looking over Chapter 1. I noticed that there is both Golam and Golan. Are they both the same person? If so, which one we should stick to?

I updated the credits. I also changed the casing on your last name as in English, we don't typically uppercase surnames.

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I'm in the process of looking over Chapter 1. I noticed that there is both Golam and Golan. Are they both the same person? If so, which one we should stick to?

I updated the credits. I also changed the casing on your last name as in English, we don't typically uppercase surnames.

https://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_INTRO_UK_TXT.s
yes it's the same person its perhaps a problem with of the original texts

so we must choice...

so why not Golan! (more golan than Golam)

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in fact the real name is Golan:

see:
https://it.wikipedia.org/wiki/La_storia_ancestrale

i already replace all Golam by Golan i all banks

now i'am translating Chapter 3 in french

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beta 6 released

Chapter 1 to 3 transalted in french and verifyed
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italian TXT bank for Chapter 4 finshed

all extraction work finished.

french transaltion of episode 4 tomorrow
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I'm about 50% done with Chapter 1 UK. There are some weird translations that I'm re-translating.
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I'm about 50% done with Chapter 1 UK. There are some weird translations that I'm re-translating.

great!
indeed some part need to be rewritten same problem in french...
i'll translate in french today last chapter
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french translation finished and verifyed
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