Storia Ancestale french & English translations (WIP) - Page 4

demoniac · 05 May 2020, 17:53

Glad I asked as the pronoun is the wrong gender.

I'm 98% done. Need to tighten up a few things. It's taking a while as I'm adding in the as much as possible the printed text when the translated text seem to match.

Also Chapter 3 deviates quite a bit from the original printed material. There was no Sacred Stone, no tibia, and Zard doesn't make poison.

demoniac · 07 May 2020, 08:49

What you have been waiting for:
http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-beta9b_edited2.7z

I also updated Chapter 1 and 2 text that were being used in Chapter 3.

For Chapter 3, _TXT2_257, 258 and 259 were blank in the Italian text. Were they missing and you added them?

CFou! · 07 May 2020, 13:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by demoniac

What you have been waiting for:
http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-beta9b_edited2.7z

I also updated Chapter 1 and 2 text that were being used in Chapter 3.

For Chapter 3, _TXT2_257, 258 and 259 were blank in the Italian text. Were they missing and you added them?

added in last minute, but not blank here in italian

attached last fixed and compiled banks

i am not again test episode 3 in english (i will test with episode 4)

but 2 bads quotes fixed.

demoniac · 08 May 2020, 08:56

Updated Chapter 3 _TXT2_257:
http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-beta9c_edited.7z

Once the entire thing is translated, I will play the game through and make a final pass.

DamienD · 08 May 2020, 18:41

Quote:

Originally Posted by demoniac

Once the entire thing is translated, I will play the game through and make a final pass.

Awesome work demoniac; and CFOU!

...cheeky, but maybe you could write a walkthrough also

Nobby_UK · 08 May 2020, 20:21

_TXT2_011 db "It belonged to the",0
db "old man. It has a",0
db "strange halo."
Old Man ??? 'hunchback man.' (from French)

_TXT2_214 db "Watching out for you grown eel!"
Just watch out! Eel! (from French)

_TXT2_249 db "Without a weapon to defend",0
db "with, Grapfits have",0
db "overwhelmed you!"
Unable to defend yourself the grapfits overwhelm you
Grapfits ??? What are they ?

_TXT2_253 db 'Tolosh say, "How disgusting... But',0
db 'it''s cheese!!! Beurk!"'
say/says ? Double ' in it's ? and Beurk = YUCK ?

demoniac · 10 May 2020, 05:02

Hell no on the walkthrough!

I'm sure someone will do a longplay.

Grapfrits:
https://ancestraltrail.blogspot.com/...oss-beast.html

I'll take a look at the other suggestions, but I'll compare with the original Italian script. The eel sentence does read awkward. I treated "Beurk" as a sound that the creature made, but have no idea with it really is.

Been asked to work this weekend, so it'll be a few days before I can continue.

dlfrsilver · 10 May 2020, 07:00

Quote:

Originally Posted by demoniac

Hell no on the walkthrough!

I'm sure someone will do a longplay.

Grapfrits:
https://ancestraltrail.blogspot.com/...oss-beast.html

I'll take a look at the other suggestions, but I'll compare with the original Italian script. The eel sentence does read awkward. I treated "Beurk" as a sound that the creature made, but have no idea with it really is.

Been asked to work this weekend, so it'll be a few days before I can continue.

Beurk means Yuck in english. =disgusting.

dlfrsilver · 10 May 2020, 07:03

_TXT2_011 db "It belonged to the",0
db "old man. It has a",0
db "strange halo."
Old Man ??? 'hunchback man.' (from French)

=> hunchback man means "homme vouté" in french, it's a man with its back broken. Old man is old man

_TXT2_214 db "Watching out for you grown eel!"
Just watch out! Eel! (from French)

=> I guess it's an electric Eel ? "Just watch out! An eel!" would be fine

_TXT2_249 db "Without a weapon to defend",0
db "with, Grapfits have",0
db "overwhelmed you!"
Unable to defend yourself the grapfits overwhelm you
Grapfits ??? What are they ?

_TXT2_253 db 'Tolosh say, "How disgusting... But',0
db 'it''s cheese!!! Beurk!"'
say/says ? Double ' in it's ? and Beurk = YUCK ?

Nobby_UK · 10 May 2020, 16:46

l'homme bossu from the french version
which google says is the hunchback man

dlfrsilver · 11 May 2020, 13:32

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nobby_UK

l'homme bossu from the french version
which google says is the hunchback man

Yes Homme bossu or Homme vouté, it's the same

CFou! · 11 May 2020, 14:39

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nobby_UK

_TXT2_253 db 'Tolosh say, "How disgusting... But',0
db 'it''s cheese!!! Beurk!"'
say/says ? Double ' in it's ? and Beurk = YUCK ?

it's correcty. two ' is necessary in string as '******' to display a single '

the result when it is displayed on the screen is:

Tolosh say, "How disgusting... But it's cheese!!! Beurk!"

it's correct, it seems...

demoniac · 14 May 2020, 06:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nobby_UK

_TXT2_011 db "It belonged to the",0
db "old man. It has a",0
db "strange halo."
Old Man ??? 'hunchback man.' (from French)

_TXT2_011 db "Apparteneva all`uomo",0
db "imbozzolato. E` dotato",0
db "di uno strano alone.",0

is the original Italian. I think the original Google translation might have been "skewed man". Anyway, I believe the man that is referred to is Golan. Golan doesn't look like a hunchback to me:
https://photos1.blogger.com/img/119/...ts%20Golan.jpg

Quote:

_TXT2_214 db "Watching out for you grown eel!"
Just watch out! Eel! (from French)

"Attento a te anguilla cresciuta!" is the Italian.

"Watch out, you overgrown eel!" is what I'm changing it to. I'm guessing on what the context is here.

Quote:

_TXT2_253 db 'Tolosh say, "How disgusting... But',0
db 'it''s cheese!!! Beurk!"'
say/says ? Double ' in it's ? and Beurk = YUCK ?

I updated this to use "says" and "yuck". Thanks.

demoniac · 15 May 2020, 05:25

Quote:

_TXT2_253 db 'Tolosh say, "How disgusting... But',0
db 'it''s cheese!!! Beurk!"'
say/says ? Double ' in it's ? and Beurk = YUCK ?

BTW, I remember why I used "say". It is because Tolosh is both plural and singular. Back in _TXT2_147, that word is plural, so I kept that form for _TXT2_253. It seems unlikely that collectively all the Tolosh would talk at the same time, so the singular verb form is likely correct.

CFou! · 17 May 2020, 13:10

@Demoniac

Have you progressed with last chapter translation?

demoniac · 27 May 2020, 06:47

Been busy with work (as in working 55+ hours a week). Didn't even have time to log in here and catch up on the posts.

I just finished Chapter 4 and updated Chapter 1 with the things that were discussed since my last upload:
http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-Ch4.7z

CFou! · 28 May 2020, 18:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by demoniac

Been busy with work (as in working 55+ hours a week). Didn't even have time to log in here and catch up on the posts.

I just finished Chapter 4 and updated Chapter 1 with the things that were discussed since my last upload:
http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-Ch4.7z

thanks for your work.

last compiled version and fixed src of UK chapter 4 here:
https://eab.abime.net/showpost.php?p...85&postcount=1

just missing ' added in your Chapter 4 translation added.

i am not again tested Chapter 3 & 4 to verify all is correctly displayed (this WE if i have free times).

demoniac · 30 May 2020, 07:13

I'll take a look at the WIN text maybe in a couple of days.

CFou! · 03 June 2020, 10:40

Quote:

Originally Posted by demoniac

I'll take a look at the WIN text maybe in a couple of days.

ok.

demoniac · 09 June 2020, 07:58

I finished my first pass at the WIN text. Will provide the final draft in a day or so.

I will also PM you.

05 May 2020, 17:53	#61
demoniac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: - Posts: 1,696	Glad I asked as the pronoun is the wrong gender. I'm 98% done. Need to tighten up a few things. It's taking a while as I'm adding in the as much as possible the printed text when the translated text seem to match. Also Chapter 3 deviates quite a bit from the original printed material. There was no Sacred Stone, no tibia, and Zard doesn't make poison. Last edited by demoniac; 05 May 2020 at 17:59.

17 May 2020, 13:10	#75
CFou! Moderator Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: France Age: 50 Posts: 4,277	@Demoniac Have you progressed with last chapter translation? Last edited by CFou!; 20 May 2020 at 11:59.

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07 May 2020, 08:49	#62
demoniac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: - Posts: 1,696	What you have been waiting for: http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-beta9b_edited2.7z I also updated Chapter 1 and 2 text that were being used in Chapter 3. For Chapter 3, _TXT2_257, 258 and 259 were blank in the Italian text. Were they missing and you added them?

08 May 2020, 08:56	#64
demoniac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: - Posts: 1,696	Updated Chapter 3 _TXT2_257: http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-beta9c_edited.7z Once the entire thing is translated, I will play the game through and make a final pass.

08 May 2020, 20:21	#66
Nobby_UK Registered User Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Liverpool Posts: 2,598	_TXT2_011 db "It belonged to the",0 db "old man. It has a",0 db "strange halo." Old Man ??? 'hunchback man.' (from French) _TXT2_214 db "Watching out for you grown eel!" Just watch out! Eel! (from French) _TXT2_249 db "Without a weapon to defend",0 db "with, Grapfits have",0 db "overwhelmed you!" Unable to defend yourself the grapfits overwhelm you Grapfits ??? What are they ? _TXT2_253 db 'Tolosh say, "How disgusting... But',0 db 'it''s cheese!!! Beurk!"' say/says ? Double ' in it's ? and Beurk = YUCK ?

10 May 2020, 05:02	#67
demoniac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: - Posts: 1,696	Hell no on the walkthrough! I'm sure someone will do a longplay. Grapfrits: https://ancestraltrail.blogspot.com/...oss-beast.html I'll take a look at the other suggestions, but I'll compare with the original Italian script. The eel sentence does read awkward. I treated "Beurk" as a sound that the creature made, but have no idea with it really is. Been asked to work this weekend, so it'll be a few days before I can continue.

10 May 2020, 07:03	#69
dlfrsilver CaptainM68K-SPS France Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Melun nearby Paris/France Age: 46 Posts: 10,421	_TXT2_011 db "It belonged to the",0 db "old man. It has a",0 db "strange halo." Old Man ??? 'hunchback man.' (from French) => hunchback man means "homme vouté" in french, it's a man with its back broken. Old man is old man _TXT2_214 db "Watching out for you grown eel!" Just watch out! Eel! (from French) => I guess it's an electric Eel ? "Just watch out! An eel!" would be fine _TXT2_249 db "Without a weapon to defend",0 db "with, Grapfits have",0 db "overwhelmed you!" Unable to defend yourself the grapfits overwhelm you Grapfits ??? What are they ? _TXT2_253 db 'Tolosh say, "How disgusting... But',0 db 'it''s cheese!!! Beurk!"' say/says ? Double ' in it's ? and Beurk = YUCK ?

10 May 2020, 16:46	#70
Nobby_UK Registered User Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Liverpool Posts: 2,598	l'homme bossu from the french version which google says is the hunchback man

27 May 2020, 06:47	#76
demoniac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: - Posts: 1,696	Been busy with work (as in working 55+ hours a week). Didn't even have time to log in here and catch up on the posts. I just finished Chapter 4 and updated Chapter 1 with the things that were discussed since my last upload: http://eab.abime.net/zone/SA_src-Ch4.7z

30 May 2020, 07:13	#78
demoniac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: - Posts: 1,696	I'll take a look at the WIN text maybe in a couple of days.

09 June 2020, 07:58	#80
demoniac Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: - Posts: 1,696	I finished my first pass at the WIN text. Will provide the final draft in a day or so. I will also PM you.

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