Perhaps yours would be far better.
But we cannot use "?" letter as messages in the script file.
(Maybe "?" becomes " ' " in the picture screen scene.)
And, let me a bit stupid question,please.
Do you mean that "Hill" is common, "Dale" is strange?
In Episode 2, I am happy if players imagine following place.
I would like to prefer "Dale", because I like this word due to personal reason.
Do you know "Sleeping Dale"?
My favorite stage of PLOK.