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Old 01 January 2014, 01:18   #28

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Originally Posted by copse View Post
For this, I think the main problem is that these two sentences rely to some degree on having watched the introduction.
Sure. I expect you should have done that at some point.
But you couldn't wait to start playing? Ok, then it sounds even more strange.

The only bit that stood out to me as something I wouldn't do as a native speaker, is use the term "the lord". That to me is something I only hear used in religious terms.
Right. Our english teacher even mentioned that ambiguous meaning. In german you won't notice, because Lord is just an english title.

Your alternative suggestions are great, BTW. I would like to use something like that when we have to make a new version.
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