Originally Posted by copse
This isn't really important, but there's no reason not to do it as the rest of the game looks so good. Get someone to edit the text. It reads a little as at best non-native speaker English, and at worst badly written native speaker English.
Believe it or not, but we even used an English teacher to rephrase all of the story texts. But this teacher was german too. When there are any more texts in a game than "Get Ready" or "Game Over" then I can imagine that it sounds a bit "unprofessional" for native speakers. Sorry, we will work on it.