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Old 31 December 2013, 21:17   #15
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It looks like a nice game based off Rick Dangerous. I played a bit of the first level, and enjoyed it.

If you ever release a fixed version, you should consider a little polishing. This isn't really important, but there's no reason not to do it as the rest of the game looks so good. Get someone to edit the text. It reads a little as at best non-native speaker English, and at worst badly written native speaker English. Ideally you'd go to a game dev forum and post screenshots, and get someone to rephrase the ideas so they fit the context.

Anyway, feel free to ignore that. Well done. You've accomplished something that most wouldn't persisted at, and made something to be proud of. Happy new year too.
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