Originally Posted by andreas
Boy, there's been a couple of horrid wording in there at parts, which read as smoothly as a gravel road.
. If that's meant to be ironic, it's beautiful!
I'll happily provide an edited version if people would like one. I work daily with Finland, Norway, Sweden, Germany, Denmark, India, Czech Republic and I don't even notice grammar.
But I really don't think it's necessary: the message comes across loud and clear.